Need englishman to help with quick homework

[djmazi12]

I need to do this right, for homework. Can anyone tell me if this is correct? would be awesome if you could improve it aswell

"This project is written in the subject?s sales economics and Danish language. The project examines various forms of promotion and different promotionstrategies. The project will also cover which ethically rules there are to be found on the area of promotion, from both the law and organisations guideline. As an example of this the project will thoroughly analyse a commercial from CULT A/S with focus on why they involve violence in their commercial. It will also contain knowledge on which forms of promotion and which promotionstrategies CULT A/S makes us of. The project will in the end evaluate why CULT A/S and other companies promote themselves or their product in a way that is close to breaking the law."

 

[Cortanz]

I need to do this right, for homework. Can anyone tell me if this is correct? would be awesome if you could improve it aswell

"This project is written in the subject’s sales economics and Danish language. The project examines various forms of promotion and different promotionstrategies. The project will also cover which ethically rules there are to be found on the area of promotion, from both the law and organisations guideline. As an example of this the project will thoroughly analyse a commercial from CULT A/S with focus on why they involve violence in their commercial. It will also contain knowledge on which forms of promotion and which promotionstrategies CULT A/S makes us of. The project will in the end evaluate why CULT A/S and other companies promote themselves or their product in a way that is close to breaking the law."

KICKAZZ, u make a new bot NOW! Name it Homeworkbuddy! u got 10 mins XD.

Nah but i read it a little fast and somewhere i saw a us when u meant use! and maybe that thoroghly is wrong spelled?

 

[okeofs]

I need to do this right, for homework. Can anyone tell me if this is correct? would be awesome if you could improve it aswell

"This project is written in the subject’s sales economics and Danish language. The project examines various forms of promotion and different promotionstrategies. The project will also cover which ethically rules there are to be found on the area of promotion, from both the law and organisations guideline. As an example of this the project will thoroughly analyse a commercial from CULT A/S with focus on why they involve violence in their commercial. It will also contain knowledge on which forms of promotion and which promotionstrategies CULT A/S makes us of. The project will in the end evaluate why CULT A/S and other companies promote themselves or their product in a way that is close to breaking the law."

[Not sure what you mean by this: "This project is written in the subject's sales economics and Danish language." The project examines various forms of promotion and different promotion strategies. The project also covers [keep the same tense here, present tense] which ethical [adjective, "ethically" is an adverb] rules, both legal and organizational, govern promotion. The project thoroughly analyzes a commercial from CULT A/S, focusing on why they incorporate violence into [this is the correct preposition, not "to"] their commercial. It will also document which forms of promotion and which strategies CULT A/S employs. The project finally evaluates why CULT A/S and other companies promote themselves and their products in a way that almost breaks the law.

Cheers!

 

[djmazi12]

Thanks alot, by "This project is written in the subject's sales economics and Danish language" i mean that the report is written with a mix of my 2 different courses/subjects, not sure what its called.

 

[greaterdeath]

If the description of your courses isn't required for the paper, leave that sentence out.

Maybe tighten up your thesis
"The project examines various forms of promotion and different promotionstrategies."
so the rest of your sentences specifically support it

- so use the facts from those sentences to create a thesis that will grab the readers attention and represent exactly what the paper is about. Get the coffee on and good luck!

 

[shink]

"This project is written on the subjects 'sales economics' and 'Danish language'. The project examines various forms of promotion and different promotion strategies. The project will also cover which ethical rules there are to be found on the area of promotion, from both the law and organisations guidelines. As an example of this, the project will thoroughly analyse a commercial from CULT A/S, focussing on why they include violence in their commercial. It will also contain information on which forms of promotion and which promotion strategies CULT A/S makes us of. The project will in the end evaluate why CULT A/S and other companies promote themselves or their product in a way that is close to breaking the law."

that's what I would say but I don't really understand what you're writing